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Lovely Lovelier Loveliest

Lovely is the name he bequeathed her on occasion he could recall when they met variable soft silkens rest upon her breast even her lips pursued his inner mindset like every young man consumed in fascination insecure, doubtful, hesitant and now totally finished even before he could begin to approach his lovely sullen was his smile, "Would you care to dance?" together the silkens now lay upon his lips 2/15/16

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Date: 2/26/2016 1:54:00 AM
Were you describing the state of the lady, with your title? or the escalating feeling the reader would have going down through these lines? "together the silkens now lay upon his lips" ... perhaps that's when it became ... Loveliest.
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/26/2016 4:53:00 AM
Thank you for commenting...appreciate your views...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 2/26/2016 1:54:00 AM
I actually didn't realize this was an acrostic until reading the comments ... an extra bonus, then.
Date: 2/17/2016 12:36:00 PM
The setting and the mood of this poem lends itself well to the subject matter of young love. Emile.
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:05:00 PM
Well that's quite lovely in itself, Judy.
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Judy Konos
Date: 2/15/2016 7:51:00 PM
Hey Lin, too bad it's not loveliness like the contest..so now I'll call it lovelymess!

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