Lovely God

Note: Gail's first poem written First grade assignment I love God. God gives our bread and meat. I thank God with a nod For God's Treat.

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Stephan McBride

Date: 8/12/2013 8:02:00 PM

amen, love it to be simple which only the lord might reveal to one later in life that we might return,,,,

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 5/29/2013 7:11:00 PM

lol, very much first grade level, Gail, you captured it very well.

Caribbean Seawolf

Date: 5/7/2013 7:41:00 PM

A riming tyke! Had the apple not fallen far from the tree? SeaWolf

Donna Jones

Date: 1/29/2013 8:23:00 PM

Doesn't get more powerful than this dear friend

Kathryn Collins

Date: 8/26/2012 8:33:00 AM

Shades of talent to come! love, Kathy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/25/2012 8:07:00 PM

Gail, wow i love your how you posted this on the soup..i have say it is very cute,,, a very nice loving treat from your first grade heart. thank you for sharing :-) always~PD

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/25/2012 1:29:00 PM

you loved your food,lol,off to a great start Gail

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/25/2012 9:05:00 AM

If this was your first poem, then you were off to a good start.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2012 5:02:00 AM

Nr. 1 .... - well done Gail !!! - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)