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Loveliness

Let me touch thy weathered hand, outstreached to serve me alms. Veil not thy face of elder years; eyes overflowed with love. Let me remember all my days, I knew loveliness as you. Need is such a painful state, each day but slivered hope. Stay with me a little while; speak wise and lovely dreams. 02/15/2016 Contest: Loveliness Acrostic Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/24/2016 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Well done.
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Date: 2/23/2016 12:33:00 AM
Very well written.. big congrats on ur win Arlene.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:09:00 PM
Arlene, Congratulations on your wonderful "Loveliness-Acrostic" win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/18/2016 8:49:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 2/16/2016 3:03:00 PM
A touching and beautiful poem Arlene. How have you been? Hugs, Connie
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Date: 2/15/2016 5:15:00 PM
lovely acrostic Arlene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/15/2016 2:31:00 PM
- You describe it so pretty, Arlene :) - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2016 2:08:00 PM
Heartfelt and it is the personification of loveliness. Super write, Arlene. A7 from me.
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