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just a little overview of my life and marriage so far.  to be continued is simply a statement that we are not done yet!  I just finished the poem where we are now!
Just married….. The suns in dropping, the drapes are drawn. The table is set, candles burn on. Anxiously she waits, for her handsome prince. Sitting on the curb, excited and tense! She gazes, at the apartment’s entry. She dreams of their life, and love of plenty. As he approaches this grand estate: In his sight, is his sexy soul mate! Raptured by her astonishing beauty: His kiss of love, comes not by duty! Raising children… The laundry is piled, mountain high. Kids are fighting, and suppers nigh. Grocery shopping was put on hold. Oh’ this routine, is getting real old! Tired and dirty, he walks through the door. Stepping on toys that are left on the floor! He says; “honey I’m home, what’s for dinner? I sure am hungry; I hope it’s a winner”! She glares at him, as if in disgust. Let’s take out, because tonight I’m crushed! Back to two….. Kids are now grown, and fear sets in. Where is that girl, and boy of then? She’s striving hard, to break her mold. In her writings, her heart is told! After toiling, yet another day: Honey, I’m home, he just can’t say! Totally burned out, and just ready to doze: A life of fishing, he does quickly propose! Gently her lips caress his cheek. Then fear does vanish, love unique! To be continued (God Willing).... Stacey Brown 1-23-14

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Date: 2/4/2014 9:41:00 AM
Thanks and yes God is willing!
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Date: 2/2/2014 9:43:00 AM
There is so much to look forward to now that it is back to the two of you. I am really enjoying this stage of our lives. Learn something new together that neither of you is good at. You will discover those kids just below the surface. Great poem, congrats.
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Richard for such encouragement, I am so looking forward to this new adventure of ours, as God is always opening doors for more growth! may God's blessing continue to pour out on you and your family, Stacey
Date: 2/1/2014 10:26:00 AM
Great win and I'm waiting for the more. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:34:00 AM
Thank you Joyce and many blessings to you, Stacey
Date: 2/1/2014 6:18:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your fine win. My next contest is "Husbands are in heaven whose wives scold not", Stacey
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Stacey Brown
Date: 2/4/2014 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram Mehta, I love the topics you put forth and am excited to enter another one of your contest soon. Many blessing to you, Stacey
Date: 1/29/2014 5:55:00 PM
This poem is so heartfelt and genuine, Stacey. I enjoyed it very much. It will be nice to read this one again when its finished! But, so far, so good!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem. I appreciate it very much. :)
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Kelly for the kind words. many blessings to you, Stacey
Date: 1/24/2014 1:21:00 PM
This is so true, So many don't make it to stage 3 yet alone 4..This a great piece...Tim
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Stacey Brown
Date: 1/26/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you Tim, you are so right so many give up and I am so thankful to God for helping us get to where we are now and so excited to see what is to come. Stage 4 retirement, how fun is that going to be? Many blessings to you and your family, Stacey
Date: 1/24/2014 12:36:00 PM
Looks like you have the start of something good. I would eventually like to see the finished product.
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Stacey Brown
Date: 1/24/2014 12:58:00 PM
Thank you Robert and me too... God willing I will finish this up as the seasons change. many blessings to you, Stacey

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