Love None the Less

She captured my heart for a blessed moment in time. Everything seems new. Now even words seem hollow as the lines to this rhyme. Hands togather I held a chance at something so very true. Strong are the arms. That held on to all but you. Such a strong appearence so many feeling I conceal Please dont look into my eyes. Cause my broken heart will reveal. As the pain is a unending stress. What is this agony So many names is love none the less. She takes my day. every second she haunts my thoughts. Keeping my heart from so very far away. To understand anothers heart we can only guess. call me a joke if you must. But a lost soul craves love none the less.

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Jay Loveless

Date: 9/24/2009 10:58:00 AM

brilliant. john im so sorry this has all come from such pain that you are indeed experiancing but my god....your pain is tranqualizing. its breath taking, astonishing, starteling, beautiful, devestating, sensational, ravishing, you paralize me with your emotions so thickly conveyed in such masterful art. again, bravo ``rain

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/23/2009 6:30:00 AM

a lost soul craves love,we are all lost souls every now and then John,but a lost soul which is as good as yours will be found and loved as deserved,life is beautiful John,life goes on and sun always shine every now and then,just have to capture the spell--Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/23/2009 5:16:00 AM

It's certainly no joke to "crave love," John. I think God put us on this earth to share love. Although you feld you had a "chance at something so very true," perhaps there is another, truer lover intended for you. I still hold out hope although I watched a husband and fiance die and have had my heart broken countless times. We grow stronger, but hopefully we don't harden our hearts so no one can reach us. Love you, friend. Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/23/2009 4:44:00 AM

We all need love John you are correct. And sometimes love hurts so bad but when it is good it is great. Thank you for sharing your poetry today. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2009 12:24:00 PM

Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara