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Love Letter Ii

Fionn Mac Cumhaill I was a fool to let go of you it sounds. All because your hairy hounds kept soiling my house and grounds. For certain I'm sure I'll never find a Godlike man such as you again. I miss kissing, your muscles rippling, fair hair glistening, what a mane. I was insane, I admit it now. Please take me back, to you I bow. Suck you salmon thumb and see you will always belong to me. Fionn my warrior, my lover, my man. I'll get you back, I must, I can. Our bed is cold, don't be so bold. Return, I promise not to scold.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 4/16/2018 12:34:00 AM

Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Jean - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"

Jean Murray
Date: 4/16/2018 3:08:00 AM

True. Thank you.

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/12/2018 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations Jean, One I knew about too, loved your entry... Mick

Jean Murray
Date: 4/12/2018 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Mick.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/10/2018 2:05:00 AM

I see why this won first place Jean. It is delightful! I had read this story from legend before but had almost forgotten it. Thank you for the memories. Congratulations on your fabulous First Place win! : )

Jean Murray
Date: 4/10/2018 3:38:00 AM

I'm glad you like it Connie. I had been searching on POF (a dating website) for someone similar when he left me. That's when I realised what a catch he was.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/9/2018 10:02:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this delightful poem! I especially like the rhymes.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/10/2018 3:36:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Manu Ranjini

Date: 4/9/2018 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Jean. Yours was an amazing poem.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 4:49:00 PM

Thank you Manu.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/9/2018 2:50:00 PM

Jean, yours was such an amazing, humorous poem! Congrats on your stand-alone 1st place win! Hugs, Sandra

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 4:49:00 PM

Lovely to see you again Sandra and thank you.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 4/9/2018 12:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:57:00 AM

Thank you Subimal.

Ashok Kumar Mishra

Date: 4/9/2018 12:19:00 AM

congratulations for the win!!! nice poem!!! regards, Ashok

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:56:00 AM

Thank you Ashok.

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/8/2018 11:26:00 PM

Conrats Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 2:56:00 AM

Thank you Rob.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2018 9:21:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 1:11:00 AM

Good morning Eve. I'm thrilled. Thank you.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/8/2018 6:24:00 PM

A well deserved first place, Jean. Congrats.

Jean Murray
Date: 4/9/2018 1:10:00 AM

Thank you for saying so Line.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/8/2018 2:03:00 PM

Well done Jean, congratulations on Ist place. Tom

Jean Murray
Date: 4/8/2018 2:06:00 PM

Thank you Tom.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2018 1:25:00 PM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your NUMBER ONE win Jean:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 4/8/2018 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Jan. NUMBER ONE !! I am overcome!

Viv Wigley

Date: 4/8/2018 12:11:00 PM

Wrap your shawl around you, and stand on the causeway, Jean, I'm swimmin' x

Jean Murray
Date: 4/8/2018 12:44:00 PM

VIV!! I'm estatic!! I can't remember my last number one!!! Should I bring a flask??

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2018 9:22:00 PM

Love the poem....Luck in the contest. Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve

Jean Murray
Date: 3/31/2018 3:51:00 AM

Thank you Eve. Same to you and yours.

Niall Fulham

Date: 3/30/2018 4:43:00 PM

Hi Jean, lol really had me laughing ' Suck you salmon thumb and see you will always belong to me ::)))) Happy Easter and Hugs~~Niall

Jean Murray
Date: 3/30/2018 4:49:00 PM

The one that got away Niall...is that you?

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/29/2018 2:50:00 PM

An interesting tale, Jean!

Jean Murray
Date: 3/29/2018 5:35:00 PM

I love him so much Kim. Good news....he's back!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/29/2018 6:30:00 AM

You painted him well in your words..handsome poem, just like the man..the reason for such festive memories..best for a win, Jean.

Jean Murray
Date: 3/29/2018 8:11:00 AM

Thank you as always Vijay.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/28/2018 6:09:00 PM

It has been far too long since I've read your clever wit! (I've no idea why, I get on Soup and just free fall) Enjoyed this very much, the attitude is so entertaining and the man - ew la la. Check 2nd line, 2nd stanza where your keyboard got 'you-happy'. A joy discovering you one more time again. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jean Murray
Date: 3/28/2018 6:13:00 PM

To be sure, to be sure Cay Cay he has me in such a tizzy, I don't know what my pen is up to to.Thank you you.

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/28/2018 5:14:00 PM

He may be strong and handsome...but not as powerful as you...You can always build a comfortable kennel for the hounds...All the best Jean

Jean Murray
Date: 3/28/2018 5:30:00 PM

Why didn't I think of that Arturo?

Jan Allison

Date: 3/28/2018 5:04:00 PM

what a fascinating tale Jean and i love the humour , good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Jean Murray
Date: 3/28/2018 5:30:00 PM

God loves a trier Jan. In real life, I hope I would have held on tight!