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Love In Time

How can you dangle my heart as you do When you know there are piranhas in the sea How can I make you feel something you won't Denying me of the love you once gave so freely You always said forever" this I believed to be true Now I see my footprints wandering alone in the sand Wondering if you were ever really here in the first place To feel these doubts piercing through my very soul Could we not dance to the song in our hearts once more Could we not celebrate our love just once more in time Is it not to the end that we should love forever more Let us keep our candle burning bright this very night Somewhere in the darkness, I search for you This madness of a roller coaster is breaking me I look from the window I see the heavens are open Angels in heaven know we belong together always For sure love is a wild ride in the midst of chaos Eyes so piercing as they float through my soul There's music in the wind as it is playing our song Listen to the tones as the wind spreads our love Journey with me through time and space Let our love feel our embrace once again 4 17 2012 2 am

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Date: 3/1/2018 1:31:00 AM
A wonderful write.........Love has ups and downs........There is a shadow of Heath-cliff and cathy as said by Michael.... these lines fantastic Journey with me through time and space Let our love feel our embrace once again
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Date: 2/25/2018 6:17:00 AM
It s a stunning write, really beautiful and full of sadness, you see that love is like a rubber if one leaves it, it will hurt the other, just remember one rhing if someone leaves you once he for sure can leave you again, I m not sure here but I guess here instead of leaving you are writig about death, that he dies, I m I right? Still both ways I pray for the happiness of borh of you and that you should again meet each other, if not in this world, then definitely in heaven
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Date: 5/4/2017 4:31:00 PM
Hello Debbie. The theme is timeless. The title is inspired and never did you stray from it. This was a different and refreshing slant on the theme of romance. Well done entirely. Honestly.
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Date: 4/17/2017 2:43:00 AM
Could we not celebrate our love just once more in time, eyes so piercing as they float through my soul, for sure love is a wild ride in the midst of chaos. These are my favorite excerpts in this brilliant write-up. Good delicacy of language.
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Date: 10/7/2016 1:08:00 AM
wow! Wow! This is so beautiful my very dear friend, Debbie. So sad, I'm so late to drop by here to read your stunning write. But, anyhow still so grateful for not missing this precious one. By the way, Happy, Happy Birthday! Wishing you all the best in life! Got a simple gift for you, a simple poem. Hope you find time to read it. Once again a very HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
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Date: 8/10/2016 12:55:00 AM
Alas this is a sad lament,A shadow here of Heath-cliff and Cathy.Romance or masochists. I know not . All is in the eye of the beholder.
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Date: 4/22/2016 3:33:00 PM
Wow wow love every second of this beautiful poem lots love xx
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Date: 2/21/2016 4:59:00 PM
Time to move on the spirit has said, we have finished our time in this fate, and written in word, the pathway has lead, the sadness I'll not understate... xox Don
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Date: 11/18/2015 2:46:00 AM
- A lovely poem, dear Debbie - Hugs and best wishes // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2015 10:42:00 PM
Excellent. Heartfelt and emotional write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 11/17/2015 4:00:00 PM
a very flowing and heart felt love poem this is!
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Date: 11/17/2015 3:42:00 AM
Debbie, may you have all the love that you desire. You have such a way with words! It is clear from all of your work I have read that you are a beautiful and giving person. We all have flaws, but you are a gem. This is very passionate and heartfelt--no wonder you cannot sleep. Now sending good waves of thought in your direction.
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Date: 11/17/2015 1:37:00 AM
Very nice Debbie. :-D
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