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Love Drilling

drilling past gravel d o w n through doubts - fears - worries . . . to bed rock – your deep love David Meade 11/18/2014 Live Generously

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2015 7:21:00 PM

oh this is so cool. Michael below calls this whimsical. I see whimsical in other poems of yours and that is a great thing to see in poetry!

Michael Miers

Date: 12/20/2014 12:06:00 PM

love it. whimsical. made me smile. there is a word to describe poetry constructed like this, but, I can't remember what it is.

Chaim Wilson

Date: 11/22/2014 6:09:00 PM

"Not only is love blind, it's a little hard of hearing" David Cleary. You used a loud jackhammer in this poem!

David Meade
Date: 11/23/2014 8:52:00 PM

Thank-you my friend -- getting to bedrock love is hard work -- but worth it. May you always find easy drilling to bedrock.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/20/2014 4:16:00 PM

I love the concept, excellent write.

David Meade
Date: 11/20/2014 9:09:00 PM

trying to squeeze out as much meaning as I can . . . may you always go deep in love. All the best my friend.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/20/2014 8:22:00 AM

Astounding poem in every way my dear friend David! Amazing word shape! a 7 for me! :) Love and light! xxx D.

David Meade
Date: 11/20/2014 9:11:00 PM

Loving someone takes time and a lot of drilling -- thank-you for being a faithful friend, may you always have love and light abundantly in your life.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/19/2014 11:26:00 AM

excellent pen david love how it drew down

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 11:33:00 AM

Thank-you my dear Liam -- the master lover driller!!

Polly Strouse

Date: 11/18/2014 7:11:00 PM

Drilling is such an appropriate word for getting through those feelings you describe and then the sweet relief of love upon the real & clever bed rock picture. Inspiring. Thank you.

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:55:00 AM

Yes, drilling is hard and frustrating work but the results are all worth it. Hope your drilling goes well -- deep love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2014 4:54:00 PM

Ahh!! Down in the bedrock is solid enough to last a lifetime..Way to go..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:56:00 AM

Yes -- 30 years and counting!!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/18/2014 2:49:00 PM

This is a good one David, you outshine. eve

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:57:00 AM

You are the best and I know you are a deep driller in the rich family love fields.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/18/2014 12:44:00 PM

You have a style of your own in poetrt which I really like..I love this line Dave-to bedrock-your deep love-Nice!!

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 8:59:00 AM

You always make my day!! You have drilled this love field many times . . . you never hit a dry hole. All the best, you are the best. bedrock love.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2014 10:58:00 AM

love the image you created David:-) Hugs jan xx

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 9:00:00 AM

Most kind Jan, you who knows much about bedrock love.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/18/2014 10:12:00 AM

What an imaginative and inspiring writing, my friend, David! Wonderfully done!

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 9:02:00 AM

My friend, I appreciate your comment -- they are meaningful to me -- may His love which is bedrock love be with you always.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/18/2014 9:58:00 AM

I love the unique layout of this poem. Looks like you are drilling to the bedrock. Well done. love phyl

David Meade
Date: 11/19/2014 9:03:00 AM

I was trying to add a little depth without distracting the reader to much . . . thank-you for your precious time!