Love Carry Me

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Love carry me through life gently Carry me to the mountainside Show me the colorful sights to see Love carry me where smiles aren’t shy Safe places to have fun and hide Love carry me through life gently Love carry me to the open plains so free To remember all we have tried Show me the colorful sights to see Love carry me to the rivers that be Words in motion moving outside Love carry me through life gently Love carry me to the tops of trees Once climbed, face new challenges to be tried Show me the colorful sights to see Love carry me far from hatred to flee Where kindness and respect resides Love carry me through life gently Show me the colorful sights to see Heidi Sands 11/8/17

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John Gondolf

Date: 11/8/2017 7:25:00 AM

Heidi, I really enjoyed your poem this morning, what a great way to start my day. John

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2017 7:29:00 AM

Thank you John! I am happy to hear you enjoyed this to start the day :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/8/2017 6:56:00 AM

So beautiful, Heidi, you surely have carried me away with this lovely poem:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2017 6:59:00 AM

Thank you Jo ! I appreciate your comment :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 11/8/2017 6:04:00 AM

As you've spoken-Let it be done...Enjoyed your poem this morning...A good day to you, Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2017 6:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Arturo. I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2017 5:53:00 AM

Among the best, Heidi--such a lovely poem to start the day--soft and caring, a beauty all around!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2017 6:09:00 AM

Thank you Vijay! I am happy to hear that. Have a great day :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2017 5:44:00 AM

This is soooo beautiful, a very well written Villanelle! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful poem of love and hope this morning! You have written such a magnificent poem that I'm in awe of its powerful words upon me! What a grand piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/8/2017 5:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Russell. I changed one word through it. Softly to gently. Hopefully it is still as you found it to be. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day! :)