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Love At First Sight

A silhouetted lengthen form, Came from out the morning sun. As my eyes adjust to its savage glare, I knew you are the one. Though mortal in my quest am I Fair maid I love thee so. Smitten as the moth to the flame, A pure vision to behold. In trepidation of things to come, Free from my lonely cell. Heart beats like fluttering butterflies, As from her lips, she chants her spell. For I am but a simple fool, And what can she see in me? For that, what can I offer? Except selfless love and loyalty. For it is said love conquers all, And for me I’m but a boy. For what do I know of true love? But in these words I try. Nicholas Windle 2009.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/15/2017 10:03:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, the amazing thing about true love is that when you see your partner you somehow knew that he/she is the one made for you, don t be afraid that you ll be rejected, the love is basically love, in it you just need to be sincair with your partner, that s what true love is, it doen t required money or beauty, you are writing poetry that alone is a success, however I m new on this site and wanted you to read my poems and tell me how you feel about them
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Date: 10/8/2015 9:30:00 PM
Young Love so precious
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Date: 6/6/2015 2:48:00 PM
Hi Nicholas: Iam smitten by your words of love . Congrats on being featured on the home page.
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Date: 6/5/2015 5:02:00 PM
Nicholas, congrats on having your poem featured on Soup's home page this week! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/5/2015 1:39:00 AM
Great write!
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Date: 6/3/2015 7:42:00 AM
Beautiful.....
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Date: 6/2/2015 11:16:00 PM
nICOLAS, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 7/15/2009 1:50:00 AM
this is a lovely poem! it really speaks and i know someone who this could absolutely realte to...this is a great write...Keep Going!! Ciara=)
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Date: 6/18/2009 8:39:00 AM
aww how sweet, love is a wonderful gift from God, some do not believe in love at first sight, it worked for me and my husband, we got married just 4 months after we met, one look we were smitten LOL, God bless you from diane
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