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Love and Life and Both Sides Now

To live a life and change each day to dream more often and replay the life you want to live and say that Life joins hands with Love, that’s true in times there’s conflict and remorse so set yourself a chartered course from where you are and where you’re going To realize you have a choice that love and life both have a voice to live a life that love demands or leave a love that life commands Suns and moons will dimly go in the final afterglow life will age as love decays set your words to music and sing a song there is somewhere you belong weather the storm and dance with the wind walk on fire with a wide mouthed grin love is a fantasy you can rescind to realize you have a choice to question life and carry on to speak of love as in despair but in the end you do not care to coin a phrase as Joni recalls I really don’t know love at all Contest Both Sides Now

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Date: 8/13/2014 10:27:00 PM
Very insightful - full go good guidance.
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:57:00 AM
I'm so glad I stopped by, this is one of the best I have read for the contest. Did you not submit it? I have done that a few times. Either way you have ended up with an amazing piece.
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:18:00 PM
Hi Lucia: Thank you for your kind comments. I was a big fan of Joni Mitchell's songs and singing.
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:47:00 PM
This is good and I loved it. I wish you luck in the contest. Blessings... Lucilla
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Date: 7/30/2014 3:23:00 PM
that was pretty clever how you tied things up with the line by JOni. It was a beautiful song , wasn't it? And you certainly captured its essence.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 7/30/2014 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Andrea: I was in her time and space and I especially liked Big Yellow Taxi

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