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Love

My love asked me so sweet, Am I lovelier than a moonlit treat? I vowed to her with all my might, When I gaze at you, the moon takes flight. The flower questioned the garden's grace, Do I bring colors to your sacred space? The garden pledged to those blooms so rare, Your presence, dear flower, makes heaven seem bare. I inquired of my beloved, my heart's desire, Shall I keep you captive in my eyes, stoking love's fire? Tenderly, my lover replied with a smile, In your gaze, the entire universe, I'll defile. The poet pondered upon his creation, Why do poems speak of pain and desperation? The verses paused, took a deep breath, The poet's tears, now dry, etched upon his breast. A POTD poem

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Date: 9/13/2023 8:32:00 AM
Sincere emotions fluently and beautifully conveyed from the depth of the heart. Congratulations on your POD. Best regards.
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Date: 9/10/2023 11:48:00 AM
Loved the mood of this poem..So Romantic. Proves once again that poetry can never be limited in theme of love.
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Date: 8/29/2023 8:58:00 AM
Beautifully worded and expressed!
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Date: 8/7/2023 11:33:00 PM
This is beautiful
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Date: 7/21/2023 9:28:00 AM
Jay, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge L Words !
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Date: 7/21/2023 12:54:00 AM
A powerful poem on the powerful theme of love.
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Date: 7/20/2023 2:03:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 7/20/2023 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/ending. I enjoyed this one. Have a wonderful day....................
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Date: 7/15/2023 4:35:00 PM
very thought-provoking poetry, Jay. Thanks for sharing with us today. And thanks for your comments when you head my way. Adios my amigo! I've no more to say. Write On! Bill
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Date: 7/15/2023 3:14:00 PM
Oh, my goodness, Jay. You need not ever be concerned about writing a Sonnet when you write rhyme in verses like these. Poets write of the joys of Spring, Summer days, Autumn leaves and Winter's snow, but I recognize that when a poet's tears fall upon his breast, that poem he's scribed will be one not forgotten by his readers. "Love" is such a poem to me and deserves to be saved as a favorite.
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Date: 7/15/2023 1:19:00 PM
This is profound Jay, and I often ask myself what is the reason behind the preponderance of melancholy poems. My answer to myself is that when we are happy , we are busy being happy and have activities to do. When we are morose, we tend to have time on our hands, time to write about it. Your poem is an insight Jay I enjoyed it my friend.
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Date: 7/15/2023 11:02:00 AM
- There is a lot of emotion behind a poem... all kinds of emotion... great writing, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 7/15/2023 10:50:00 AM
Passionate poem, it has a beautiful flow too - really enjoyed! BW ~ Mala
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