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Love

My heart is alleviated, Wishing that it was all a dream, Hoping to wake up soon, From this nightmare, Nothing else matters to me, I left all left behind, Looking at your eyes bright, Staring at me, Feeling the deepest pain, Yet comes another day with full of rain, My heart is empty and blain, Pounding like it would drain, When you are far away, I want to hold you tight, Wishing that you are mine, Forever and ever together never apart, My soul, body, and heart, Loving you always and forever, If you ever ask of what I want? A man who is interesting, loving, caring, funny, He is the one that you are, And that is the one I want, When I touch your heart, Wondering how long can it be hold? Forever the lasting heart, 8:55 am Wensday, waiting for your call, My mind wonders off, Wondering why? Wishing to hold you forever tight, Missing you dearly,  Trying to be on your spot, Not knowing what will I do, I just can't believe that this is happening, Remember I am just a phone call away, Best friends are always there, In good and bad times, I love you, Vic now and forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/10/2009 3:56:00 PM
Dear Shirin,Congratulations on YOUR Featured POEM "LOVE" The Title says it all I know of this deep rooted LOVE YOU so perfectly convey AWESOME LOVE POEM ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/9/2009 1:58:00 AM
Shirin, congrats on your feature of the week...Raul
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Date: 5/7/2009 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature this week! Nicely done :) Izzy
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Date: 5/5/2009 9:31:00 PM
Passionate writing. Well done. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/4/2009 8:00:00 AM
Congrats shirin on "Love" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:30:00 AM
Shirin, Love that strong feels so good and hurts so much...The dichotomy of love. Beautiful poem. Congratulations on your poem "Love" being featured this week. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/4/2009 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/4/2009 3:56:00 AM
Wonderful writing, Congratulations on being featured, kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:23:00 PM
This is one of the most loveable love story posted. Congratulations. Mineis also featured this week.Ernilando
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:10:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/3/2009 7:10:00 PM
Very moving and well done. Congratulations on this work being among the featured works this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 4/30/2009 1:35:00 AM
Shirin, this a unique love story. I like it. Get moving my friend. Ernilando
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Date: 4/30/2009 12:05:00 AM
Written from the heart Shirin.Rgds Brian & thanks for youe welcome comments
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