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Lost Without a Trace

lost without a trace in a small little place I've been erased and been replaced its hard to find when you are left behind feels like there's nothing in my mind everything is empty and dark its time to make a mark and disembark searching for a road to offload i need to decode before i explode I'm always on the edge need to make a pledge this is all hocus pocus i need to start and focus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/8/2010 11:25:00 PM
good write...love nikki.
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Date: 6/2/2010 6:59:00 AM
Enjoyed the penmanship of this poem, sounds as though you have a beat poet inside of you.
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Date: 6/2/2010 3:36:00 AM
I enjoyed your feelings of lost without a trace. Nicely expressed
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Date: 6/2/2010 2:54:00 AM
feeling of abandonment well portrayed
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