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Lost Within the Thoughts

Lost within the thoughts of future sorrow where shadows hold to hands in grief and loss wishing freedom for a new tomorrow. The silent walls and bridges yet to cross alone in time with sanity’s loose grip where shadows hold to hands in grief and loss. With life’s sweet nectar soured, deathly sip… diseases fester, gaining in control alone in time of sanity’s loose grip. Beyond endurance, voices collect toll of crimson promises…a slash away. Diseases fester, gaining in control. Repeated chorus as the blade hold sway abandoning the reasons, cause of past… The crimson promises just slashed away. Along the path of misery, life’s last. It’s lost with thoughts of pain’s future sorrow, abandoning life’s reasons…it’s the past. Wishes now are freedom’s new tomorrow. Janet L Vick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/17/2012 12:40:00 PM
Stopping by to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Janet. It is always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry. Love, Carol
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/19/2012 12:00:00 PM
Thank you Carol, especially for your comments. Take care. Janet
Date: 1/9/2012 1:10:00 AM
you and me are carved from the same diamond, Jane people get depressed by reading most of my work although i find only truth and solace in a familiar feeling, thank you, i love your work.
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Date: 1/8/2012 7:07:00 PM
enjoyed has a great flow!!
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/11/2012 11:17:00 AM
Thank you Doris, Greatly appreciate you reading and commenting. Take care. Janet
Date: 1/6/2012 6:17:00 AM
beautiful poem, your style is different from mine and i truly appreciate it, how long have you been writting?
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Janet Vick
Date: 1/6/2012 12:51:00 PM
Thank you. I have written poetry since I was a kid, many years ago. I have been writing in various forms over the last 5 years. Before that, it was strictly free verse. Take care, Janet

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