Lost Time

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All time is woven into the fabric of the universe. Make the most of time before it rums out.

Lost time runs fast into star-fire past moon-glow into deep mind, flows fast past dawn, soft dusk, then tires. Wait, wake true-time, meld into mind, skim safe, sail sure, take back time seek your star, true-time from fire-kind.

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/29/2016 9:13:00 AM

Hi Elisabeth.....reveals your relationship with the universe....yes, well done...jim

Elisabeth Sheaffer
Date: 8/31/2016 11:50:00 AM

Thank you Jim. There is so much out there and we will never understand half of it.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2016 11:57:00 AM

very lovely thoughts Elisabeth

Elisabeth Sheaffer
Date: 8/27/2016 9:17:00 AM

Thanks Tim. It makes it all sound pretty, doesn't it?