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Lost Thoughts

Gazing at the beautiful sunlit sky Daydreaming as my thoughts start to fly In that indescribable space My thoughts are my private place When it's quiet; I dream When it's noisy; I scream! I feel disconnected from reality, Far from the worlds true practicality The peace that I hope to find I find within my own mind My eyes have been opened to what's in front of me One day hoping to see peace and harmony I am stuck between these perplexing ideas Wondering lately where my mind is Some days, I retreat far back into my mind Truths and facts do fade with time My thoughts are a place with limitless freedom Many cannot grasp the meaning Yes I can see it clear as day Lost thoughts hidden behind jilted memories just fade away

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Date: 3/16/2016 5:49:00 PM
Jeffrey, sometimes our thoughts turn into a vortex going round and round, forever disappearing and never found. Your poem conveys this. I like your use of rhyme----it is quite imaginative. All the best with your writing, Sonia.
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