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Lost Soul

'Twas the darkest of nights on Johnstown road Light rain dripped from the hanging Spanish moss An old man shuffling down the road shivered "Trade my soul for dry and not count it loss" The smell of sulfur broke through the damp trees As shrill laughter permeated the wood Reptiles wrapped the old mans limbs and body And he was no longer where he once stood 10-23-20 Contest : Eight Lines of Spooky Rhyme Sponsor : Tania Kitchin

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Date: 11/6/2020 11:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in this spooky contest, Larry :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2020 12:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/6/2020 10:49:00 AM
Larry, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2020 11:01:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. Also thank you for the placement in the NA's / HM's. That one was much appreciated, also. Second chances really feel good sometimes !!
Date: 11/5/2020 2:13:00 PM
Larry, congratulations on your winning placement with your spooky, gory poem!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/5/2020 3:30:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!

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