Lost Love

I tried to live without you But my heart cannot take the pain of missing you I tried to laugh without you Still life only bring me more tears of you I tried my best to seek you with my soul However i cannot see past my burning tears I abandoned my future in loving you But now i am losing you Once life gave me all of you Now I lost all of you to life

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Pam Deremer

Date: 7/20/2015 12:34:00 PM

A very simple but emotionally packed poem. I liked it.

Tu Tran
Date: 7/20/2015 12:51:00 PM

THANKS, PAM! I'M JUST A BABY WHEN IT COME TO WRITING BUT I KNOW I'M AT THE RIGHT PLACE TO LEARN.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/20/2015 5:34:00 AM

This write is extremely excellent Tu, I realy enjoyed it...........A.M.

Tu Tran
Date: 7/27/2015 5:00:00 PM

THANKS, I ENJOY WRITING IT. TU

John Fleming

Date: 7/19/2015 1:07:00 PM

I understand the sentiment of what you are expressing so very eloquently...very nicely put! :) john

Tu Tran
Date: 7/19/2015 9:06:00 PM

THANKS, JOHN! I'M NEW TO THIS AND YOUR COMPLIMENT JUST ENCOURAGED ME TO DO BETTER.