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Lost Embrace

fleeting paths of resistance have stood guard for far too long   be held tonight inside the coffers of my weave   gently peel back the lesions bade down upon my need   enter my lair and entangle in me let loose your ribbons   to the sea     crest each wave with fortitude encased in a lost embrace

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Date: 9/20/2018 5:04:00 AM
Good Morning Tim. I love the poetic title. Your words so match it with your poetic expression and execution. Your ending was a wonderful poetic touch to mirror the title. May this day find you well.
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Date: 8/29/2018 1:49:00 PM
Nice one Tim. I like the line: let loose your ribbons to the sea!
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Date: 8/29/2018 12:13:00 PM
beautiful, tim! i love the "let loose your ribbons" line...
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Date: 8/29/2018 12:10:00 PM
I'm with Brenda below, definitely romantic and very cool Tim. You know I love love poetry. : )
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