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Loss of An Innocent Mind

One day he took a journey of his life, and entrusted his soul to a very beautiful angel who didn't have a halo, and always slept by 3 a.m. after experiencing a higher influence. She always called him "schizophrenic", and he always knelt immaculately before her, to be saved from the jaws of fantasies. "You'll never marry me or move to Paris with me!" she always assured him. One morning he woke up next to a girl; a girl who was once an angel in his eyes. She had broken his spirit, bit by bit... Loving her was like going to war; he had never been the same again.......

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Date: 10/17/2018 7:46:00 AM
This is so sad. But you wrote an amazing poem here, Teddy. I hope you're still writing.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2019 2:48:00 PM
Yes it is, Becca... Well, I'm back again! :)
Date: 5/5/2018 8:09:00 PM
what a sad sad scenario Teddy, hope you will be posting again soon my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 9/19/2019 2:47:00 PM
Hi Jan. Glad to be back! :) Hope you are good! :) Thanks for commenting on my work! *^_^*
Date: 2/9/2018 5:45:00 AM
Think many feel like this.. Well written Teddy..
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/9/2018 12:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Silent One, for enjoying my piece! :)

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