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Losing the Way

Walking the straight path, Tracks aligned, perfect symmetry. Lifeless, soulless, Limping in reality. As an empty canister, In the heart of a gale; Swayed by every nudge, Trashed by every gush. Within, that cunning confidence, Deceiving blissfully. That senseless fool, Believing indefinitely. Step by step The soul disconnects. This hollow frame, Dissolving, decaying…losing the way. -Titus Loh- http://after-tim.blogspot.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/26/2016 6:00:00 PM
Titus Loh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2016 2:47:00 PM
Titus, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Titus Loh
Date: 1/4/2016 6:27:00 PM
Dear SKAT, thanks for your kind comment, appreciate it. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Date: 2/24/2012 6:38:00 AM
Early morning reading to get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Titus. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:36:00 PM
Glad it made your morning better and not worse! Thanks Carol.

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