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Losing Proposition

Losing Proposition Alcohol can really wreck your life The list of friends will constantly shrink It cost me my job,I lost my wife So I tried to sober up,then think Oh hell,just have one more little drink Hard Choices contest/Dr. Ram Mehta Greg Hoffman 6/16/2014

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Skat A

Date: 11/3/2015 9:16:00 PM

Greg, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2014 3:56:00 PM

Greg :) Thank you for the sweet reply, on my comment. I'm a little late, getting back to all the replies, left a while back. XOX ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/5/2014 11:31:00 AM

move on move on don't try it again.... :) drink a cup of Love better.. :D, BIG CONGRATULATIONS!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/4/2014 4:03:00 PM

Ah! but that one more little drink could have fatal consequences! Very good write, Greg. Congrats on a deserved win. // paul

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:05:00 PM

Thank you very much and thanks for commenting

Jadazzle United

Date: 7/4/2014 2:24:00 PM

A very powerful write on a tough choice. Well deserved winner. jan xx

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:10:00 PM

Thank you and thanks for commenting

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/4/2014 11:13:00 AM

Excess Alcohol is definitely a losing proposition. Congrats for top win. Mohan

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:11:00 PM

That's what I thought,thanks and thank you for commenting

Ct Duet

Date: 7/4/2014 11:06:00 AM

Wow...congrats...and thanks for sharing

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:11:00 PM

Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2014 9:51:00 AM

WOW, now that's a Hard Choice. Congratulations, hoping you made it though... Linda

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:13:00 PM

Just barely lol,thank you for your WOW,from you that means a lot.Thanks again for your comments

Robert Johnson

Date: 7/4/2014 9:25:00 AM

Boy, you nailed that one, dint cha? Congrats on a profound write.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:17:00 PM

Got lucky with that one.Thanks for commenting

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/4/2014 8:29:00 AM

Wow a great reality Greg ! Wonderfully penned ,, deserved top win , big congrats!

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:18:00 PM

Thank you and thanks for commenting

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/4/2014 8:16:00 AM

A unique write on the Hard Choices and fine Rhyming, Congrats on the win in my contest, Greg

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:09:00 PM

Thank you very much,it was a fun write and the first time I ever tried that style of poem.Thanks again

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/27/2014 6:43:00 AM

Never give up, my friend. Alcohol is one of the toughest to beat, but the rewards are great.. Hugs.. Arlene

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/4/2014 6:16:00 PM

Thank you Arlene and thanks for commenting