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Long Cold Winter

**Haiku** bitter wind blows stout pelting icy snow crystals…. cold winter’s harsh thoughts **Senryu** treed primate postures like Indian totem pole…. new politician Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey Second Place Winner ~ "Natural and Beyond” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: John Freeman Sept 22, 2011

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Date: 7/18/2012 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2011 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations Caryl on your win in John's contest, beautiful poetry... I am sending you a soupmail~~
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:53:00 PM
OUTSTANDING. And congrats. First time I saw these!!
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Date: 8/29/2011 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful write.Congrats Caryl on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of John, Caryl
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Very creative work from the picture..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2011 5:10:00 PM
Congratutalions on your win in John's contest, awesome poem and thanks so much for your reading my poetry, I so appreciate that!~~
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Date: 8/29/2011 2:55:00 PM
Love the haiku, but the senryu is incredible, Caryl! New politician, indeed. Folks in D.C. could learn from this "treed primate." Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2011 1:25:00 PM
hey caryl congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/29/2011 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:29:00 PM
Clever and funny . Congratulations.
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:21:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your wonderful win with this poignant piece for the contest my friend..luv..
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:14:00 PM
Cool humor there in the last line Caryl. Congratulations on your worthy poem's second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/27/2011 1:53:00 AM
nice piece and best of luck.
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Date: 8/26/2011 1:41:00 PM
Lovely images to convey your lovely thoughts, good luck, Caryl
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