Loneliness

evening shadows where were you while they crept

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Date: 12/7/2016 4:01:00 AM

Wow, so vivid, I like this write, I also like ur war memories write, so exact. Great stuff

Charles Henderson
Date: 12/7/2016 2:07:00 PM

Thanks much, Lewis. I will go back and revisit war memories.

Date: 11/14/2016 9:19:00 PM

wow, this is great haiku, Charles. How have you been? Just never see you any more!!

Charles Henderson
Date: 11/25/2016 2:42:00 PM

Have been growing old dear.

Date: 11/12/2016 6:24:00 PM

I agree with Arthur lots of emotions in thoes 3 lines.

Charles Henderson
Date: 12/7/2016 2:04:00 PM

Thank you Darlene !

Date: 11/12/2016 5:25:00 PM

I agree with Jan, so much emotion in those 3 lines!

Charles Henderson
Date: 11/12/2016 5:39:00 PM

no answer to an expectation is always a sad thing.

Date: 11/12/2016 4:46:00 PM

beautiful but sad Charles:-) I felt a chill dwon my spine reading your haiku. hugs Jan xx

Charles Henderson
Date: 12/7/2016 2:03:00 PM

Thanks Jan, always good to hear from you. Am trying to get settled back into the groove here, but is keeping me busy.