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Little Treasure

And a pair of those little feet were stepping Cheerfully, treading each period which was carrying her somewhere nowhere A fragmented laughter echoed from all angles hailed her name For she is the apple of her father's eyes... She grew with everything As if born with beautiful wings, which not only adorned her body But abled to carry her flew away to heaven that was made for her... For she was the angel of her mother's heart.... Petite figure stood on a naivete ... The dream world slowly manipulates, toying her, risking her A trust betrayed finally ... And that scourge became the first stain of her life ... Those little feet have now taken their big steps A girl has grown into a lady By rising from the rubble of brittleness Let the kisses of the past remain there and dwell For the broken wings of her last For the fear and frighten which had past For the big steps of her sane For the pain and stain which finally end for her gain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2013 8:32:00 AM
I am sure the new hair looks good. You may not know this but I also cut hair. I come from a family of barbers, grandfather, dad, uncle and Grandmother was a hairdresser. I just cut hair as a volunteer for Kelowna Gospel mission.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/20/2013 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Rick :D wow, another talent of you, not only writing but also cutting hair? You are FANTASTIC! :D I admire you even more :D
Date: 4/19/2013 7:51:00 AM
How is my little treasure from the other side of the world. I didn't read your poem crazy in case you submitted it to my contest. Let me know if you haven't and then I will read it.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/19/2013 10:51:00 AM
Hello Rick :D I'm adding it into your contest :D it was inspired by the contest that you made :D I'm fine here feel so happy today and I just had my new haircut hohoho
Date: 4/17/2013 8:36:00 AM
Simple and beautifully penned. Thumbs up Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/10/2013 10:31:00 AM
Thank you Abdul, your comment made my day :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/16/2013 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Yanny, sweet dreams for you.
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Date: 4/15/2013 7:55:00 AM
I love how you weave your words, simply lovely and magical.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/15/2013 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Rick :D pleasures to have your visit today :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/14/2013 11:48:00 AM
Yanny my friend, it's gorgeous!!! - I love it !!!-Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/14/2013 5:51:00 PM
Thank's Anne :D glad that you love it :D you really make my day :) wishing you a wonderful day Anne, hug, yanny
Date: 4/14/2013 10:42:00 AM
Oh my. This is absolutely stunning. You write with such depth. I find this very haunting and elegant
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/14/2013 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Karen. :D pleasure to have a visit by you :) wishing you a lovely day there d hug yanny

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