Home » Poems » Shane Cooper » Little Red

Little Red

Red hood Girl good Nan ill No pill Mum dumb No chum Wolf bad Bit mad ………………………………………………………………….. Wolf munch Nan lunch Wolf chew Red too Huntsman Has plan Wolf snip Unzip Red free Whoopee Nan out Big shout Wolf dead Behead

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/25/2015 10:52:00 AM

Clever footie, Shane. You've alot of imagination and talent to rewrite these, yet to still follow through with the storyline. Keep well and stay happy, Mikki

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/25/2015 3:44:00 PM

Thanks Mikki, I appreciate your comments. Thanks for stopping by Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/19/2015 5:11:00 AM

- Great footle, Shane .... well done :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/19/2015 5:17:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I really enjoy rewriting nursery rhymes in this form. love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2015 1:26:00 AM

lovely string of footles Shane you told a great story:-) hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/19/2015 1:33:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I just love these stories but I think the wolf is getting a pretty hard time of it. So far he has been boiled in one and unzipped in another. I think I might have to find a new protagonist. Love Shane xxx