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Salvador Dali's "
La persistencia de la memoria".

Tirelessly inevitable. Age has an implosive nadir. The surprise creaks of pain like a sudden realization, inextricably perceptible. Leaden mirrors. Dust follicles. Mirages. Undyingly entropic.

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Date: 5/18/2021 8:14:00 AM
Wow brilliant and awesome!!! I like how you express the entropy with ageing, the nadir sounds very poetic but if it is realised to be nearing heavenly afterlife then it can be thought of more happily and positively. Kudos for this power !! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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