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Little Miss Spring

They say it's a time to slip in the mud, and begin anew. Kick off the dust of yester ... and put on the dress of Yes Sir! and Thank You Ma'am She sure is a joy This baby little season And like moths to a flame we praise her name (we don't need a reason) And who can blame the helpless admirers trigger happy on their Kodaks drunk with Marigold Merriment. No matter your profession, everyone's a poet, when spring comes along, like a child, showing off her dandelion face, believing in her curious way that death has been conquered. But reality comes in firehouse red, with silver sickle blades that say, No can do, Little Miss Spring, not every bird, on every branch, has a song to sing. The fact of the matter is ... you're just another three months (Winter? Autumn? They're simply taking an overdue lunch, but they'll be back with the same fire The same ice) Hate to break it to you, Sweetie, but not everything nice is destined to remain (it's a cyclical thing ... you understand) You can bet your slender green stem even Little Miss Spritely has her down days, but like teenage hysteria it's just a phase (we can just pretend those zits are poppies they smell fragrant enough) And yes of course It's a time of LOVE! Young and Fresh --- Tongue and Flesh like good ole Elmer Fudd would say (bweeding like wabbits) Oh Little Miss Spring, surely you can't have everything! Green grass and blue sky --- it's halfway sickening the way you steal the show with your sunny splendor. And Poor Old December ... you left him in the cold, bragging up your warmth and innocent demeanor (I saw what you did to the snow) It can all be forgiven though Truly it can! I know it might feel like I'm freezing you out (but all the cool months are doing it) ... 'tis no excuse you saw through my ruse I'm just killing time before the Melancholy Mob comes back into town. Remember how they used to hang around Stick in the Mud Lane poking holes into your joy? (they annoyed me too) And what became of the pessimists, the argument-ists, the I-don't-believe-in-all-this kinda crowd? Are they all hibernating somewhere like Mother Grizzly? (If you ask me they can take all advice from this soda pop fade and fizzly) Written March 15th, 2016 For the Spring Contest Hosted by Catie Lindsey Poem of the Day: March 18th, 2016 Placed 8th

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Date: 4/10/2016 12:39:00 AM
Hello, Tim, I'm just here passing by enjoying your poem of the day. I like this joyous write, sweet and fun. LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2016 3:03:00 AM
Very nice creation. Truly impressive.......hugs
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 4/7/2016 9:50:00 PM
Thank you very much, Manmath!
Date: 3/27/2016 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!! Very creative write!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 9:21:00 PM
Thanks Arthur!
Date: 3/26/2016 9:55:00 AM
Congrats Timothy! You're swaying with the spring!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 9:08:00 PM
Thank you Balveen! Spring is a joyful season (as well as a humorous one) :)
Date: 3/25/2016 11:16:00 AM
Hi Tim, excellent once more, we have ignition, let us just flow into your song of Spring. There are always those humorous twists in your work that i Love. This poetic songis no exception Tim. I Love the way you dance to your own tune. Well Tim, this has to be a seven and also, it goes into my faves....Vlad.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 8:59:00 PM
Honored, Vlad! I enjoy humor, and am happy to pass on the giggles ... your comments are always insightful and entertaining, dear friend.
Date: 3/25/2016 9:41:00 AM
Timothy, another wonderful write a7 and congratulations on your win!!!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 8:45:00 PM
Thanks Eve! :)
Date: 3/25/2016 7:55:00 AM
Back again, Tim, to congratulate you on your win in Catie's contest! Sandra
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Sandra. Much appreciated :)
Date: 3/25/2016 3:54:00 AM
'drunk with Marigold Merriment' lines like this and others make your poem shine with humor and a delight to read. I can see why this was POTD! Congrats on that and on your placement in the contest. Kudos Timothy! ; ) Connie #7
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/28/2016 8:35:00 PM
Thank you Connie! I always try to have fun when I write :)
Date: 3/20/2016 8:44:00 PM
Fantastic poem, A definite fave.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/20/2016 9:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Charmain! :)
Date: 3/19/2016 1:48:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. (yesterday :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/19/2016 11:41:00 PM
Much appreciated, Anne ... you as well!
Date: 3/19/2016 1:16:00 AM
Congrats Eve for the beautiful Poem of The Day. Love. Anisha
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/19/2016 11:11:00 PM
Why thank you Anisha ... however my name is not Eve, though Eve just recently had a Poem of the Day as well ... perhaps you were thinking of that, while commenting on this! Lol ...
Date: 3/18/2016 8:38:00 PM
Grats! A great poem for poem of the day.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Casarah!
Date: 3/18/2016 7:58:00 PM
Hi Tim, congratulations on your outstanding poem being honored as Poem of the Day! Love it! Sandra
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 8:50:00 PM
Thanks Sandra!
Date: 3/18/2016 7:05:00 PM
you really are a great writer Timothy, congrats on pod
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 8:46:00 PM
Thanks Brian ... I appreciate it!
Date: 3/18/2016 11:20:00 AM
Tim, congratulations on POTD, most deserved...
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 7:12:00 PM
Thanks Charlie!
Date: 3/18/2016 10:49:00 AM
"Stick in the mud Lane"...that visual is forever! :-) Apropo choice for this upcoming season for POTD! Write On to you!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 7:08:00 PM
It's the place where pessimists congregate. Thanks for the lovely comment, my friend.
Date: 3/18/2016 9:51:00 AM
Congrats Young Tim : )
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Tim! :)
Date: 3/18/2016 8:47:00 AM
What a great choice for POTD. Congrats Timothy!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Richard ... I am excited once again :)
Date: 3/18/2016 8:43:00 AM
Excellent write Timothy. Wonderful smooth flow and thought filled words. Enjoyed reading it this morning.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 6:05:00 PM
Thank you kindly James!
Date: 3/18/2016 6:44:00 AM
This poem belies your age. Your young mind doth go into the most entertaining and delightful worlds. Thank you for sharing what you see there with those of us who cannot fathom what your mind imagines, Tim.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 5:59:00 PM
Your lovely comment was a treat to read, Lin ... happy to open the door to interesting places ... And everyone is invited as far as I am concerned :)
Date: 3/18/2016 5:52:00 AM
Very enjoyable! Congats on your POTD!
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 5:54:00 PM
Thanks Mr. Quigley :) Wasn't aware until you told me .... I'm positively delighted.
Date: 3/17/2016 6:54:00 PM
You are insanely clever, my friend. I am so glad you are back here in FULL force. Love your stuff and this is one more example why.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 1:49:00 AM
Thanks Andrea! Good to be back ... :)
Date: 3/17/2016 10:00:00 AM
Timothy, you are so original in language and form. There's a fresh surprise in every line. I cannot express well enough what joy it is to read your work. Good luck with this one.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/18/2016 1:30:00 AM
Thanks for the quality comment Mr. Mark. Appreciate you stopping by and giving your thoughts.
Date: 3/17/2016 12:53:00 AM
Hahaha love the innuendos and the comical portrayal of little miss spring the she devil. Well done.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/17/2016 9:05:00 PM
The she devil .... that is Great! Lol! Spring never considered Winter's feeling when she took the snow away ... quite rude! Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/16/2016 8:09:00 PM
Wow! What magnificent gem with so much pleasantries, and back and fourth tease; and images busy as bees. A+ You top the chart of winners already.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 3/17/2016 8:55:00 PM
You read it well (with rhyme too). Thanks so much your encouragement and support! I had loads of fun with this one :)
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