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Listen Listen to me my dear mate: "Don't go to bed very late! Night is time for a rest 'Cause tomorrow you have a test."

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John Fleming

Date: 8/20/2017 6:05:00 AM

I wish I could go to bed at night time! I am a "Postie" and have to work nights unloading lorries and trains when sorting the mail...Ahhh well -- when I retire! :) My best regards, Victoria. :) john

Victoria Stasiv

Date: 8/4/2017 7:46:00 AM

I also can't fell asleep early so I write poems at night. Thank you for the comment!

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/1/2017 6:13:00 AM

Well a nice written poem, I really like the idea of it, but don t you think that teeenage is the only age for fun, well once it gone than you ve all life, yeah we should give importance to our studies but someone told me that teenage days are for over sleeping and teenage nights are for over sleeping, well I m 15 but I honestly have problem with my sleeps, like no matter how early I go to bed, I can t sleep before 2, and at 6 30 my mother wakes me up for school, it s so sad when she wakes me