Lisa

Lisa' heart has been stomped on lisa has been rejected many time's lisa had almost given up on love then lisa meet's mark in the park is mark giong to notice her or walk on bye Lisa heart start's thobbing lisa hand's are sweating Lisa mouth is very dry Lisa is in awe by his good look's does mark like his girl alittle nerdy? alittle dorky? alittle corky? Mark is flaltered but preoccupied by her flaming red hair both wondering if fringe benefit's in the air Lisa beauty is intoxicating they kiss and go hand in hand out of the park well their love last forever?

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:08:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Bradley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 08/16/2012

Bradley Cox
Date: 8/16/2012 2:31:00 PM

Thank You Carol for the warm welcome, I away's read the other poet's poetry everyone has something different and it a great joy to take it all in. and i truly enjoy poetry soup, take care i am going to see what turn's everyone on,

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2012 7:41:00 AM

I feel like Lisa at times... love your poem....pd

Bradley Cox
Date: 8/14/2012 10:20:00 AM

Thank You for reading and you input

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/14/2012 5:29:00 AM

Happy for Lisa - well written Bradley, like it. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Welcome to P-Soup, have fun with poetry. :)

Bradley Cox
Date: 8/14/2012 5:34:00 AM

Thank You Anne-Lise