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Lily

In a world once devoid of all color. Near the end of it's mythical age. Was bestowed a final magical gift Before time could turn the page Lily was born to Avalon And raised in Lyonesse She spoke in soft melodic tones and moved with angelic finesse Her skin was the shade of the harvest moon Her heart of the sun's warm caress Her eyes were forged of emerald mist and her hair was a windswept mess Sweet Lily knelt at rivers edge To splash her upon her face The waters of the sacred flow Which carried nature's grace When she raised her head she felt renewed and she wiped the wash from her eyes To see reflected, a strange new world An awe inspiring surprise A world of color newly formed by this girl and her new found powers Beauty swept throughout the realm Of Sweet Lily the queen of the flowers Radiance followed where ever she walked Her path was not hard to detect Fragrance of lilac filled the air While tulips all bowed with respect She wandered forth, the wind her guide To share her precious gift Rainbows free to arc the sky and infinite bubbles adrift It's said she wanders still, this place A world of her minds creation All beauty it seems is a product of Sweet Lily's imagination

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/24/2014 10:52:00 AM
Joe, Stopping by to check out a few of the featured poems:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Joe! Another one! Always, Annalise
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:23:00 PM
I just am seeing you placed high with this one. GOOD! and congatulations. LUv, andra
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations Joe,on your win in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:59:00 PM
Joe, congratulations on your win in the contest :)
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Date: 2/27/2011 11:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:47:00 PM
How very lovely Joe, ongratulations on your win. Loe, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with u luv.. a good friend.. thankxx for reading all my poetry Joe..
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Date: 2/26/2011 7:41:00 AM
Joe, good to see you at the top again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's fourth place honor in Constance's inspiring contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:45:00 PM
great to see your name in the winners ring Joe, all the best.
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Date: 2/25/2011 9:18:00 PM
Congrats to you..thi is a great poem. BG
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:00:00 PM
This had to win. It is my fav. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful story you have penned here Joe!Congrats on your win----kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:23:00 PM
happy congrats to you wowow LILY, joe! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:52:00 PM
As I predicted earlier, Constance did like this entry of yours. Congratulations on winning in the contest.
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Date: 2/25/2011 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Constance, Joe
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:07:00 PM
Joe, yours is somewhat like mine, and one of the names I had originally considered was "Lilly Anna!" So I really enjoy seeing this one from you because you also noticed the importance of the flowers in her life!! Very nice. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/22/2011 12:11:00 PM
I am stopping by just to thank you Joe, for your kind comment and also to ask you to continue with your writing endeavors. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 8:22:00 AM
yes, this exquisite piece blooms with fine expressions and images, joe... mine is a bit dark! beautiful, this lily of yours!! :) winning luck to you! huggs, nette
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Date: 2/21/2011 4:40:00 AM
This is beautiful, Joe. Looks like a winner to me.:) The flow and imagery gives one the sense that they tiptoe on the outskirts, taking glimpses at "Sweet Lily". It's soft and subtle...sort of dreamy. A lovely write, Joe! Love, Mikki
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Date: 2/21/2011 3:35:00 AM
Reads like winning material to me...Great rhyme and rhythm..Excellent story..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2011 11:14:00 PM
Way to go Joe. This has great descriptiveness and rhyming in all of the verses. Constance will like this entry in her contest.
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Date: 2/20/2011 10:58:00 PM
Joe - Nice piece. Imagination at its best. Best luck for contest. Thnxs for liking my verse, "Sex Meditating" and leaving encouraging comments. Luv & best wishes....Hitendra Mehta
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