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Lifting the Fog

Lord,I am lost I have wandered Far from The righteous path Into the mists of desire Never thinking of consequences Grabbing at the easy rungs of life Trouble has become a companion Here now I pledge,no more Enter my life,I pray For Only you can show the way Grace me with your light 7/3/2014 For contest:1-4 Acrostic Sponsored by:Andrea Deitrich

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:38:00 PM

Greg, a true deep scenario .... Congratulations, on your wonderful win. Always~ LINDA

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/18/2014 8:47:00 PM

Glad you place with this great poem :) well done.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations, Greg.. PD

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/18/2014 8:51:00 AM

I love that you put such a wonderful testimony in an acrostic poem. Thanks! Congratulations on your placement.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/18/2014 8:39:00 AM

I can think of no better way to lift the fog. Congrats on your win.

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/18/2014 6:45:00 AM

Amen! He can truly lift the fog my friend! Congrats on a great win. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/18/2014 12:50:00 AM

Greg this is the best one I hv read so far,, we all need HIS blessings n light always! Congrats on win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2014 11:31:00 PM

Greg, you chose a wonderful way to show the theme of "Lifting the Fog" with this spiritual poem. If it had been punctuated, I'd have put it in the top three! Congratulations.

Greg Hoffman
Date: 7/18/2014 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Andrea for your comments and your choice of titles for this contest.My Achilles heel has always been punctuation,never did get a handle on it.Thanks again

Cherl Dunn

Date: 7/5/2014 8:29:00 AM

This is a spiritual write, love it's uplifting feel and the message you've share with us, faith can be a very positive motivator is a wonderious write. cheri

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/3/2014 8:38:00 PM

Cool :) I like your acrostic, good job :) acrostic's are one of my favorite forms of poetry I've learned because of this website. such fun to read :)