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Life's Mysteries

Long before the wonder of you began I sat with hands held tight for none but love Far away past the crescent moon, I ran Each moment led me to what I dream of Simple yet divine is your affection My wish is for us to live forever You and I share the strongest connection Scintilla nights with you….my endeavor The joy of my dear life is but one thing Each memory lived with you as your wife Resounding angels gaze at us and sing Ineffable moments became my life Embracing your love I shall never cease Sweetheart, you’re one of life’s mysteries ________________________________________ Life's Mysteries Contest 12.20.20 John Hamilton

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Mark Koplin

Date: 1/2/2021 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/1/2021 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Love your last line, "Sweetheart, you’re one of life’s mysteries." So true. Enjoy your win. "Happy New Year" Have a great 2021. Today, have joy/blessings....................

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/31/2020 2:11:00 PM

Although i don't know you, I feel like I have seen into the window of your heart in this poem. Such lovely writing. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!

John Hamilton

Date: 12/31/2020 10:24:00 AM

So nice to see something new from you, I had a feeling this was you but wasn't sure as you have not been posting lately! I was pleasantly surprised to see this was you in your inimitable style. Congrats Laura on another top win, nice to have you back!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/20/2020 7:17:00 PM

Wonderful poem filled with love and joy, Laura, all the best:)

Constance La France

Date: 12/20/2020 2:12:00 PM

Laura, so nice to see you posting poems again, missed my sister in poetry so much and this acrostic is truly beautiful and filled with the love for your one true love, well done _Constance

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/20/2020 3:45:00 AM

Ah, your acrostic is tender and romantic, well placed in every way, Thank you for sharing dear Lu, have a blessed day and a wonderful Christmas xo

Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2020 10:45:00 AM

thank you sweet Rosie, nice to see you :) -luloo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/20/2020 3:01:00 AM

I love this, sweet lady. I'm overjoyed to see your posting again!!! I've missed you desperately. I love you. God bless you with a win :)

Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2020 10:45:00 AM

awww thank you so much dear Regina, I missed you too! Thank you and be blessed :) -luloo

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 12/20/2020 2:58:00 AM

Sweetheart, you’re one of life’s mysteries- it's beautiful that love and sweetheart is always a mystery of life

Lu Loo
Date: 12/20/2020 10:45:00 AM

thank you very much :) -luloo