Lifeless

Lifeless Authored by Chuck Keys I wish she loved me, anyway, but some. The heart needs the up-time as the soul needs an echo. I wish she loved me, always, maybe forever, but not never. Loveless is not an existence; it is a span of emptiness, a wasteland. I miss what I no longer have as Man needs a God. Do I? Destined to alone, am I alone, or am I free.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/23/2011 8:49:00 PM

chuck, congrats on your poem being featured this week,have yourself a wonderful weekend,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/17/2011 4:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Chuck. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 6/10/2010 12:41:00 AM

The short triplet form suits the emptiness conveyed by the thoughts Chuck.Rgds Brian

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2010 1:16:00 PM

hello, Mr Chuck Keys, just going down my fav. list. Hope to read a new poem of yours pretty soon,..Sidney LeeAnn

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/1/2010 10:22:00 AM

Sometimes the being alone can be felt as freedom.. Other times its just sad, lovely introspective write ~ WN

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2010 9:21:00 AM

Nice to see you on line Chuck, sad on your thoughts here, but I am going to go with free. No one is never alone, ha i feel alone than I turn around and it is all in my heart to feel like that. Have a nice one,..Sidney Lee AnnM.