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The woman is she who waits for a dream hers are the treasures of pleasures she brings her gift to the one whom caresses her soul the river you’ll know where her life water flows The woman is she who waits to let go of all inhibition and boundaries she knows for the one she can trust to reach deeply inside where you have to let go cause there’s nowhere to hide Where all is exposed no secrets are found no problems or worries or thoughts are you bound the moments transcending this most sacred place washed warm in her life water rivers embrace The woman is she who secretly yearns to know the sweet scars of a passionate burn As called by the river from deeply inside It can’t be ignored so it won’t be denied The woman is she whom is waiting for you waiting for just the right magic you do to take to her river where life waters flow where the truest of lovers are destined to go

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Date: 12/14/2021 11:49:00 AM
Superb pen Jeannie, great rhyme and flow with excellent word choice. Blessings always,Gordon
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/15/2021 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Gordon
Date: 12/7/2021 11:20:00 AM
You don't miss a single heart beat here, when you write like this, I love the rhythm and the flowing words of love and affection dear Jeannie. Thank you for sharing y our talented pen today, :)
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/7/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thank You. Seems these days I am writing more from a place of frustration than anything else. The holiday spirit is having a hard time finding a crack in my walls. I’ve never been this close to giving up on hope before, it’s a sad and terrible feeling I wouldn’t wish on anyone yet still know there are far too many with whom these feelings I share.
Date: 12/6/2021 5:27:00 PM
Nicely done Jeannie. This makes me think of a young girl who waits anxiously to fall in love and wonders what it will be like. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/6/2021 9:10:00 PM
Thanks Judy, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 12/6/2021 5:07:00 AM
Excellent penning Jeannie. I wish I had found a woman like you describe. Have a gtreat holiday season.
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Jeannie Cronin
Date: 12/6/2021 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, it’s never too late, you never know…

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