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Life Is a Bed of Roses

Why is life so dear? Beyond my grasp, yet near inside Age ages me - despair rages me Where am I leaning? Time toys with us Where and when we go nobody knows Does the time for us diminish? Or was it never there The soil, the tulip, the rain - have no thoughts Feel no pain - suffer no loss - nor love of gain The beast, the fish - have limited thoughts Live in worlds ruled by might and fear - not reason We are designed for so much more Yet superficial surface we live Material quests dominate human needs We pursues endless nothingness Man walks stalks what his senses reveal Falsely led by accumulation - falsely driven by ego Sharp blades skating on the surface ice Detached from what lurks below inside We are designed for so much more Yet superficial surfaces we live Material quests dominate human needs We pursue endless nothingness Where do I find what I wanted? Fraught with minimalness Was it ever there or too far beyond.... I still can't see her and I fear it's too late But never experienced that joy Swimming or drowning Where does evil live, if not Time holds me still or is it fear? Chuck Keys

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Date: 10/27/2015 10:47:00 PM
Excellent reflection about life.
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Date: 10/15/2015 1:15:00 AM
MR Chuck.. a good poem on life and trying to make sense in this realm called earth.. i life i have learnt to appreciate the small things that way i partake the great ones with peace.. deep and thought provoking piece it is//blessings
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Date: 11/21/2012 9:56:00 PM
Chuck,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 3/28/2012 8:33:00 PM
endless nothingness... i love that expression! there is a complete emptiness that's the core of existence. hope your journey will lead you home soon chuck
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Date: 3/28/2012 6:37:00 AM
Good morning, life should be enjoyed... And the best way to make a bed... is impossible..but, them roses sound good and smell good....lets change our experience for better comfort..always pd
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Date: 3/27/2012 6:55:00 PM
Every line of your poetry is pertinent.I relate to the line, "Time toys with us." it certainly does. When we are young, time is endless. At my age it roars on by without stopping. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/27/2012 4:17:00 PM
The lines "We are designed for so much more, Yet superficial surfaces we live"..I especially like those..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/27/2012 2:35:00 PM
"We pursue endless nothingness" that line really spoke to my soul, it is so true Chuck, want and need rule life if one lets it, I am going to try to end that cyle, wonderful poem, well done.
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Date: 3/27/2012 1:55:00 PM
kindred....believe it or not there are folks who THINK and still believe..who have FAITH and still think..thanks for your kind comments [check out unitarian universalists] Light & Love [oh ps you do not sound like straw man!]
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Date: 3/27/2012 2:19:00 PM
fortunately or not, i am not a straw man - i cant even turn my brain off when i sleep. i dont enjoy the sadness and pain of life (as others also) only the beauty, and the change that comes within it.
Date: 3/27/2012 12:50:00 PM
Wonderul poem! I really enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/27/2012 12:15:00 PM
Very well written, I love it.....Thank you for sharing it. Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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