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Life In General

My life these days just can't be beat To be honest it's quite the treat Blossom's blooming upon the tree Hummingbirds feeding peacefully Blue jays bouncing across the yard They're just little birds playing hard The mountains truly seem to glow All covered white with winters snow I treasure life with its embrace My soul is now a peaceful place My mind is on quite a mission Out to better its position To me this life is like a dream My love flows like a mountain stream So crystal clear and full of life I serve my Lord and love my wife Write my rhymes for the world to see Beauty of life's simplicity I'm a man that has found his plight By serving God and shinning bright In general it is going well That's in as far as I can tell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/17/2010 5:06:00 PM
keep shining brighter thanks for your comments and knowing him is the greatest blessing God bless
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Date: 2/17/2010 9:38:00 AM
So glad to hear your life is so wonderful right now, Michael!!! Keep that smile and we all look forward to reading your work when you have more time to post. God bless you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:47:00 AM
Michael, I am so happy for you. And proud as a peacock too I must confess. I am so excited for you and your family. Your poetry is amazing as usual. Thank you for your kind comments. Love and blessings to you and yours always, Carol YF4L
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:06:00 AM
Excellent couplet my friend.... Well written with your rhyme..... Good work.....:JP]
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