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Life In a World Perfect

Life In A World Perfect Life in a world perfect, never to feel hunger. Life in a world perfect, never to fear thirst. Life in a world perfect, never to be homeless. Life in a world perfect, basic days need fulfilled. Life in a world perfect, cannot turn a blind eye. Robert Gene Stoner Jr © 12/7/16

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 5:12:00 AM

Hi Robert, You've penned a well written thought provoking write. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/23/2016 2:16:00 PM

Thanks for the read Alexis and words of encouragement for my effort, much appreciated, Merry Christmas

Darren White

Date: 12/11/2016 12:03:00 AM

No, but it happens far too much, blind eyes. Congratulations!

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/23/2016 2:16:00 PM

Thanks for the read and visit of congratulations , much appreciated. Merry Christmas.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2016 6:46:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Robert:-) I got a lump in my throat reading your poem ... a thought provoking write:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/23/2016 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Jan for the opportunity to explore this form and muse. A placement is appreciated as always, Merry Christmas to you and yours.

Paloma P

Date: 12/8/2016 9:40:00 AM

I really like your take on the matter at hand, most affecting I've read so far, good luck Robert!

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/23/2016 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Paloma for the read and comments on this effort, much appreciated, Merry Christmas

John Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2016 8:34:00 PM

Great poem, love the concept, coming soon!

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 12/23/2016 2:13:00 PM

Thanks John for your read and positive comment on this piece, Merry Christmas