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Life As You Create

In an egg like world One thought he is what he is Long before his birth Doing more shrewd steps Grounding too much to struggle Thriving as crystals Water like mirror Reminds human true nature Splendid moments leap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/6/2016 4:06:00 PM
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Just reading your note that you replied to me a long time ago in September of last year (I don't see the replies because my notification feature is turned off) So you are a november baby, huh? You are end of fall. I am beginning!
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 3/21/2016 10:08:00 PM
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Love this one, I was born in October. Marvin. PD
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 3/28/2016 4:08:00 AM
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Thanks!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2015 10:46:00 PM
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I see this is a winner. Big congrats. ARe you an October baby?
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 9/16/2015 11:46:00 PM
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Thanks Andrea! November...A month before dawn, on October sky is November.
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/2/2015 12:27:00 PM
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This is a different take on this theme, when compared to the others, Marvin. A poet born in October! Congrats on your podium finish! // paul
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 9/8/2015 6:30:00 AM
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Hi Paul! Thank you! Actually November, October is a month before November, before dawn. I was born 12:30am of Nov 15, 1968. Thanks for dropping by...
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Skat A
Date: 9/2/2015 12:02:00 AM
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Marvin, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 9/2/2015 12:24:00 AM
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Thank you Skat! I didnt expect I won!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/31/2015 4:51:00 AM
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Eloquent words n lovely haiku string marvin! congrats on big win!
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/31/2015 5:11:00 AM
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Thanks Dr. Upma!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/20/2015 10:42:00 AM
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Your words speak in an elusive abstract voice that supplies the catalyst to spark further thought. Emile
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/20/2015 10:45:00 AM
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Great Emile! Thanks!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/20/2015 9:14:00 AM
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wow Marvin I do love your take on the contest theme:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 8/20/2015 9:30:00 AM
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Yes Jan! Thanks!

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