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Lewd Crude

Black shrouds blue a dingy hue This greedy minscus constricts us ~~~Mother Earth's shameful eyepatch~~ A gull's squak gurgled crude chirping 89 octane birdsongs forever grounded by fossil fuel fettered feathers sharp eyes, glazed over, searching the horizon for a savior from this senselessness Feed the steely beasts, produced in fleets, chrome teeth and audible horns, the black blood we gave them and thirst for thanklessly. Their evolution halted by prophets of profit We extract that which we cannot put back veins spew petroleum poison hemmorhaging Cuts bleed. Logically Yet here stands man, knife in hand confounded by healing our wounded land as figureheads foist fingers frenetically ***Inspired by Poetry Soup's Gulf Oil Spill contest!!

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Date: 10/24/2010 6:08:00 PM
great entry. jhl
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Date: 6/28/2010 10:41:00 AM
Ouch! This one stung. Great job. Send it to BP Steve.
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Date: 6/10/2010 7:03:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your awesome poetry this morning Steve. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2010 1:44:00 PM
Very powerful words, Steve. Especially like the references to Hemmorhaging and the "eye patch." That's what it looks like. The dinosaur's remains are wreaking havoc on sea life. This should be a winner in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2010 1:37:00 PM
Good luck if you have entered this one in the contest...It is excellent topic and compostion..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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