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Letting Go of Our Daughter

Love multiplied, your first crying sound Eyes opening to the world around To gaze at your newborn face, the sensation That of peering down the generations In our lineage, conditions to fear Now more worried, each passing year Giving up, choices breaking trust Girlhood dreams begin to combust Officer, with whom we discussed Young womanhood beginning wrongly Fell temptations pull you away Although it pains all of us, strongly For now, with others you must stay Cherry blossom sun Broadest smile, to me you run Vigorous hug, love 4/12/16 For Contest: Letting Go, Three Form Style Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 4/20/2016 8:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful wonderful poem, and the photos just make it all the more personal and emotional! Great write!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/20/2016 10:05:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur!
Date: 4/13/2016 10:35:00 PM
Thanks for the kind reply,, Tom. Pd
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:37:00 PM
A wonderful win, Tom,, Congratulations on your "Letting Go win." XOX ~LINDA~
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/13/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
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Date: 4/13/2016 9:38:00 PM
It's not easy letting go. My daughter's old enough, and I still can't let go. pd
Date: 4/13/2016 6:23:00 PM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/13/2016 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, BL!
Date: 4/13/2016 3:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Tom :)
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/13/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/13/2016 1:29:00 PM
awwww..Tom so sweet and a lovely picture of your daughter... congrats on your placement and for being in my contest! :)-luloo
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Tom Quigley
Date: 4/13/2016 3:01:00 PM
Thank you! A fun combo of forms. :-) Shamless plug--My daughter writes here when time allows--Elissa Quigley

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