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Let's Take a Trip

Sometimes while sound asleep at night, I go on an amazing flight. From fluffy clouds, while floating down, I pass a fairy and a clown. I drift along and soon I see the Scarecrow. Now there's Dorothy. Hey, Alice from the Wonderland and Scooby Doo, you look so grand! Tarzan is swinging on a vine. He says with Lion King he’ll dine. Beside me now is Seuss's cat demanding I return his hat! Hey, Cinderella, there's the shoe the Prince himself will bring to you. The Beauty and the Beast drift by with Dumbo. On his ears they fly! Do you sometimes have nighttime friends that stay with you till sleep-time ends? March 30, 2023 Title of Contest: Children Sing to Rhyme Placed 1st Sponsor: Eve Roper April 7, 2023 Contest Name: Write a Sweet Fairytale For Children with a Good Outcome Ending, ie Nobody gets hurt Placed 2nd Sponsor: BJ Legros Kelley

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Date: 5/6/2023 9:30:00 PM
So cute Janice! Congratulations on your win! Thank you for entering your sweet poem, and we enjoyed the nice format! Great job:)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/7/2023 12:01:00 PM
BJ, thanks a million for sponsoring the contest and for my win! Janice
Date: 4/10/2023 11:10:00 AM
Janice, congratulations! This poem made my heart say "Ahhh!" Lovely dreamlike rhymes and lines that so evoke the joy of childhood dreams! Congratulations on your win! Happy Easter season!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/7/2023 12:02:00 PM
Sam, I SO appreciate your response to my poem! Janice
Date: 4/9/2023 2:39:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Nursery Rhyme contest, Janice :) - hugs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 5/7/2023 12:03:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise. Janice
Date: 4/8/2023 11:06:00 AM
Cute and sweet and all things children will like Janice. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/8/2023 8:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Linda. Janice
Date: 4/7/2023 9:06:00 PM
I love this a lot. This is such a delightful and beautiful nursery rhyme poem/song for children my dear poet friend. I'm pretty sure children will enjoy this immensely. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you and your loved ones this Holy Week and always.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/8/2023 6:51:00 AM
Len, thanks a million for this wonderful response to my poem! Bless you. Janice
Date: 4/7/2023 4:50:00 PM
Janice, congratulations on your win on your poem, “Let's Take a Trip". Many blessings to you. Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/8/2023 6:50:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Date: 4/7/2023 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Let's Take a Trip" is a fun write. Have a blessed day................
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/7/2023 2:59:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice

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