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Lets Make Love 8

Sleep my lover you and I, under the deep blue sky break into my dreams, with your open arms your sealed lips with mine lets intertwine with love's fluid sacred and divine. sleep till the morning kisses your undraped skin placed against mine. lets infiltrate our soul beyond the time as we make love so my lover to discover lets make love ! lets make love !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2012 2:49:00 AM
Very lovely poem, dear Red! I wonder whether the poems is more beautiful or YOU. Anyway, the poem is more than enough to arouse any man's feelings of love. I wish I were your addressee!!! hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh In that case, I would have obeyed your command immediately. May we get introduced?
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/8/2016 8:29:00 PM
:)
Date: 4/10/2012 2:35:00 PM
Sounds good to me! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/8/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thank you !
Date: 2/13/2012 9:54:00 AM
Very sensuous poetry !!
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Date: 3/8/2016 8:30:00 PM
Thank you dearest !
Date: 2/9/2012 11:13:00 AM
You are quite clear in this poem. Fine erotic imagery! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/6/2012 2:19:00 PM
I'm 65 but still 'alive' I loved every word. God bless. Dave.
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Date: 2/4/2012 8:00:00 AM
lets make love 8, 1 to 7 was pretty exhausting Red, but loved every minute, hope i can keep it up, the reading of the poems that is. harry
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/8/2016 8:30:00 PM
how lucky I am to see you here....
Date: 2/1/2012 7:09:00 PM
So soft and gentle, like a dream you can't awaken from. A lovely experience!
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Date: 2/1/2012 8:27:00 AM
Red fantastic follow up, been waiting for this sensual and sexy episode,nice to see you writing again..love David
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/8/2016 8:29:00 PM
Thank you David...I miss you:(
Date: 2/1/2012 3:19:00 AM
WOW.... beautiful love poem Red !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Red Fiery
Date: 3/8/2016 8:31:00 PM
thank you Anne...ur a sweetheart :)

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