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Let the Ball Lie

The little boy said to his father, I wish I could drive the ball farther. He said to his son, By time we are done, Your ball will "lie" just past the others.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 1:40:00 AM
HI, RAy, just saying I appreciated your reading my poetry the other day!
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Date: 4/5/2013 6:40:00 AM
haha...clever. Great for the contest!
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Date: 3/31/2013 4:29:00 PM
this is a great one, Ray, and I expect to see it in the winner's circle. Happy Easter to you. It's a nice day in UTah.
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Date: 3/30/2013 8:13:00 PM
Great limerick! I'll be sure to get the large mouthed kind next time! Have a wonderful Easter yourself!
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Date: 3/30/2013 4:11:00 PM
Cute one with the play on words..I can just imagine what size fish they catch..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 3/30/2013 3:27:00 PM
I enjoyed your verse this afternoon, Happy Easter weekend. Light & Love
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