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Let No Man Put Asunder

Let No Man Put Asunder Such as ours the gods had never granted passion so harmonious even they could not know such exultation. Endlessly steeped euphoria, absorbed until no need for balance exists between us. We are intertwined enduring into the blackest of black. Soddered in pain the cord refuses to unravel. Kathryn McLoughlin February 8, 2014 for a valentine contest incorporating the ten words: absorb, balance, endure, passion, intertwined, exalted, harmony, steep, euphoria, endless.

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Date: 2/9/2014 9:20:00 AM
Kathy this is an excellent write and a great entree for the contest, I may have a go at this one....David
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/10/2014 7:17:00 AM
Thanks David - It's PFT - challenge for Feb. love, Kathy
Date: 2/8/2014 2:58:00 PM
The very best of luck in the contest Kathy. A fine poem . Not sure what soddered means but I hope you are better now .
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Darren Watson
Date: 2/9/2014 12:07:00 PM
No Kathy I didn't know . Soldered and glued are words used in England but I can think of quite a few words defined as English that are spoken in other countries but not in mine .
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/9/2014 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Darren. Maybe glued instead of soddered would have been a better choice of words. Actually maybe the word is solder (oh I hope it can be spelled both ways) - when you fuse two pieces of metal. Right? You probably really know that. love, Kathy
Date: 2/8/2014 11:15:00 AM
You did a splendid job....Tim
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Kathryn Collins
Date: 2/9/2014 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Tim. and thank you for reading. Kathy

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