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Lemons

citrus spray fills the air nails dig in thin yellow skin lips pucker body shivers P.R.Deremer

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Date: 11/15/2020 1:02:00 PM
You've penned another winning haiku. A fine, fine read. Be well. Brian
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Date: 4/26/2016 11:14:00 AM
Exhilarating!
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Pam Deremer
Date: 4/26/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/10/2016 6:26:00 PM
Very nice Haiku! Great lemon imagery that really made me feel its presence! Sandra
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Pam Deremer
Date: 4/26/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/9/2016 4:36:00 PM
The scent of citrus in the air is divine..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Pam Deremer
Date: 4/26/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thank you.

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