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Legs Are My Wings

At some point, my legs begin to converse of time spent on the trail, rest now needed, For like a horse's labors exceeded, the strength mere food and water can't traverse Beyond exhaustion, repose will reverse Thus respite, backpack set down and relieved of duties, containing my home achieved, until such time as rested legs endorse my return to trails, and onward I go; Traveling far Appalachia’s way, witness to wonders and all living things, in far towns and altitude, well below, where nature’s flora and colors bouquet; To motivate legs that have become wings. Written: April 25, 2014 for Craig Cornish's Miltonic Sonnet Contest

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Date: 7/26/2019 12:59:00 PM
Looks like you love hiking! Beautifully written!
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Date: 7/26/2019 9:01:00 AM
Hi Michael, this sonnet is a doozy. Like your wit and ease of idiom within this (at least for me), constricting form. Well played sir!
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Date: 6/6/2014 3:36:00 PM
Dear Michael, Truly our legs can carry us many places that later become memories. I love the way your legs became wings so you could continue to journey both in spirit and physically and allow more memories to accrue. Wish I could traverse the Appalachian Trail with you! It is very beautiful in that area. (Thank you for your kind words about my poem for my lost friend. Much appreciated.) Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 4/27/2014 10:13:00 PM
As a point of information about this poem, I am an Appalachian Trail section hiker, embarking in 10-days for a month hike from Central VA to Southern PA. This is the conversation that occurs between a 55-year old retired Navy man and his beasts of burden,,,in this case, my legs!
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