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Legend of the White Pumpkin

Legend has it She cast her spell to gain his love With a lock of his hair and feather of a dove He murdered her on all hallows night Then planted a pumpkin on her grave site White as her hair the pumpkin did grow Legend says it is so Wow 50 words burns up quick that was harder than i thought it would be.

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/4/2009 9:22:00 PM

Wonderfully creepy in its own right with just the right touch of macabre--perfect halloween poem--super congrats on your first place win!

Donna Golden

Date: 10/31/2009 3:58:00 PM

Michael, this has everything! Great story, spooky spin, creativity! Congratulations on your big win! Hugs, Donna

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/31/2009 1:40:00 PM

Well done MJ , Great inventive piece and well deserved ....

Pamela Griffiths

Date: 10/31/2009 5:18:00 AM

Congratulations on winning first place in Rauls contest. Lovely poem. Pam.

Constance La France

Date: 10/30/2009 8:33:00 PM

Michael.. congratulations on your first place win... what an exceptional, impressive and charming poem..

Marty Owens

Date: 10/30/2009 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations...Very nice poem...Marty

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/30/2009 6:44:00 PM

congrats Michael! really a great scary poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/30/2009 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Michael. Love, Carol

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/30/2009 3:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your FIRST PLACE WIN MJ!!! This is a great poem! ~Tru~

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/30/2009 3:18:00 PM

Congratulations on you 1st place WIN with this awesome poem, Michael! One of my favs! I hope you are well. Bless you always! Love, Robin

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/30/2009 3:07:00 PM

Great great evocative effort a real numero uno! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/30/2009 2:19:00 PM

Great poem here. Yes, that 50 words ws a sticker, but you got it all said beautifully. congratulations on your first place. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/30/2009 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in Raul's White Pumpkin contest... very nifty piece of verse... enjoy all your poetry the more I read ... good job..

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 10/30/2009 1:52:00 PM

Great poem Michael 50 words is hard to keep under. CONGRATS!

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/30/2009 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on this spooky story, and winning poem, Michael!! Great job!!

Elaine George

Date: 10/30/2009 12:42:00 PM

WHAT A MAGNIFICENT STORY. CONGRATULATIONS! MICHAEL OF YOUR FIRST PLACE WIN. RIGHTFULLY SO. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER AND POET. LOVE, LAINIE

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/30/2009 12:21:00 PM

Michael, congratulations on winning my contest. 50 words do burn up quick...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/19/2009 8:32:00 PM

Imaginative.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2009 3:46:00 AM

~~~Magnificent~~~Michael. Thank you. Love, Carol

Laurie Ginn

Date: 10/18/2009 9:23:00 PM

Okay it may be a great poem but its late and with no lights on it made a chill go up my spine.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/18/2009 7:05:00 PM

Dear Mr. President of the Cool Name Club Michael, I do believe I will see this magnifecent POEM in the winners circle Good Luck YOURS ALWAYS...HG ---My computer has been down for about 3 months I have a lot of lost time to make up now ALWAYS...HG

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/18/2009 6:39:00 PM

Great poem! Love legends like this! Good Luck MJ!!! ~Trudy~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/18/2009 4:29:00 PM

This contest has produced some great lines. This poem is a winner. BG

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/18/2009 6:43:00 AM

you are very talented! Michael! this poem rocks!

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/18/2009 2:25:00 AM

Michael, thanks for the support...Raul