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You complain I am too slow I am too fast Too dumb Too many shoes You liked my legs well enough Before you tasted the fruit You had sweet words Now you speak with sour grapes If I was male, I’d nail you to a stake Choosing you My life’s mistake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/9/2016 4:11:00 PM
I'm not complaining...I'm not paying for the shoes:) ...and you are no dumb blonde:) Joking apart, this is a delightful poem, and you are right to have a go at him! I love that 2nd stanza! ~ Regards /x/ paul
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Date: 5/24/2016 11:45:00 PM
If you can laugh at life you have love, you dear sir are very kind :) xoxoxoxo
Date: 5/6/2016 12:55:00 AM
BTDT! Eve may have used these words after eating from the tree. I love it! ; )
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Date: 5/24/2016 11:43:00 PM
Very sweet thank you from heart, xoxoxo peace and love